Friday, February 18, 2011

new song

recorded this

http://tindeck.com/listen/omtn

3 comments:

  1. Not bad. The beat needs some work, it doesn't feel like it's naturally in 4/4, so it's hard to groove to. Your lyrics are pretty good, though the beat also makes them seem a bit awkward rhythmically.

    Keep going with it, there's something pretty legit in there.

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  2. Needs a more steady beat in it. Otherwise, sounds pretty okay.

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  3. Oh haha, not even my beat. I'll use a different one. I'll re-record it sometime.

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