Not bad. The beat needs some work, it doesn't feel like it's naturally in 4/4, so it's hard to groove to. Your lyrics are pretty good, though the beat also makes them seem a bit awkward rhythmically.
Keep going with it, there's something pretty legit in there.
Not bad. The beat needs some work, it doesn't feel like it's naturally in 4/4, so it's hard to groove to. Your lyrics are pretty good, though the beat also makes them seem a bit awkward rhythmically.
ReplyDeleteKeep going with it, there's something pretty legit in there.
Needs a more steady beat in it. Otherwise, sounds pretty okay.
ReplyDeleteOh haha, not even my beat. I'll use a different one. I'll re-record it sometime.
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